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Number 503, June 2, 2004

Iakiv Holovats'kyi (1814-1888)


“Oh, a storm is threat’ning

My very life today

If I don’t get some shelter

I’m gonna fade away”

—Mick Jagger and Keith Richards, “Gimme Shelter”


 

Val Blackhawk

 

The park was remote from town and quiet but for an occasional car on the bridge, which rose above a grove of cottonwoods and sycamores. In the twilight before dawn, I spread my sleeping bag on the sandy ground by a rough concrete boat ramp under a sycamore. The wind shook the cottonwood leaves. I imagined sunset throwing shadows across the open meadow and into the grove. I could hear horseshoes ringing. Families laughed and chattered, and once in a while someone raised his voice to make a point. The land beneath the trees and the muddy banks was swathed in treasure the river uncovered in unknown and innumerable floods.

 

The morning had grown bright. Only a constant riffle on the bank of the river and the engine of an irrigation pump broke the silence. A couple of cars were parked on the road to the gate. I watched them out of the corner of my eye as I gathered up my things and made ready to take off. An Indian woman walked over.

 

“I’m Val,” she said as she flipped back her long, shiny black hair and held out a soft, brown hand. It felt good to take it. “Val Blackhawk. Whatcha doin’? Do you mind if I ask?”

 

Val wore a jean jacket. Her shirt sagged, and she seemed to be plumping out of her jeans, but not unattractively so. She smelled not unpleasantly of beer and perfume. Her eyes were clear. The cottonwoods formed an avenue behind her. An Indian man sat behind the wheel of a truck. He nodded and smiled. He lifted his index finger from the steering wheel.

 

“I’m taking this canoe to Kansas City,” I said.

 

“I seen a couple of Australians on the river once,” she said, looking over my shoulder at the dense thicket of willow and cottonwoods at the bank. “It’s pretty swift here. Once my husband went swimmin’ off the boat ramp, and we hatta pick him up from the other side, downstream aways. But my husband isn’t such a good swimmer. My daughter swims here all the time. I got six kids. We’re Fort Peck Sioux and live on the reservation near here.”

 

“It’s a nice place?”

 

“Well, it’s very nice. Thanks for askin’. You might not think it’s nice.” She slid her hands into her jeans pockets and twisted back and forth at the waist.

 

“I see nice things everywhere.”

 

“Maybe you’d like it then.”

 

“I’m sure I would, especially if everyone was as friendly as you.”

 

“Well, not everybody. Most people.”

 

“This park, it’s a nice place. What about it?”

 

“Well, no offense or nothin’,” she turned and took in the park, a beautiful place opening up in the morning light under the canopy of cottonwoods and sycamores. A cool breeze filtered down from the dark banks of the river. “But the Indians sold it to whitemen, and the whitemen closed it.”

 

“No offense taken. Why did they close it?”

 

“It was a nice place, a good place for picnics and parties, ya’ know. But once the Indians sold it, whitemen ruined it. First, they closed it at night so we couldn’t come here. Then they closed it altha way. But we still come here, ya’ know. Indians, I mean.”

 

Judging from the worn condition of the road, plenty of people came here. I wanted to know why the Indians sold the land, it was such a beautiful place. But thought better of it.

 

Val walked back to the truck, climbed in with her husband. They smiled at me and drank beer while I gathered my things together. I looked back over my shoulder as I launched the canoe and saw them waving goodbye.

 


 

Simple place

By Gail Trudeau

 

Walking along the narrow flower bed

I converse with each cluster of recently

sprouted zinnias and 4 o'clocks

like they are my children.

Stooped to touch the tender cells of life,

I am reminded of the smoothness

of my daughter's cheek as I stroked her face

while nursing her some 20 years ago.

 

In the garden, time neither comes

nor goes; and though these delicate clusters

will mature into beauteous flowers,

their spent petals will be carried off

by the wind, leaving seeds to bed down

for winter's sleep in earth's womb.

 

Fingernails black with moistened soil and

framed with stains of clover and crabgrass,

I am summoned by the telephone and

the expectation of daughter's call.

Led away from this ever-present simple place

where butterflies do not hurry away,

daughter's voice is jubilant and

warm as the sun setting on my back.

And she, fruit of my harvest, freed

from clover and crabgrass

is exuberant, thriving; the reflection

of me before flower gardens grew

outside my back door.

 

When I place the receiver back into its cradle,

I listen for a moment in stillness.

'Come to me,' my flowers whisper.

'We will show you the way

where there is no end

from life

to life.'

 


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