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Number 453, Jan. 14, 2004

Marianne Moore (1887-1972)

 


“A guest under my roof has sacred privileges. His is to be intimidated by no one. Not one word shall he hear that would prijudice him in favor of goin’ away. I’ll not have it. There’s no place in this town where they can say they iver took a guest of mine because’n he was afraid to stay here.

—Scully to the Easterner, The Blue Hotel by Stephen Crane


 

Lousy with Jims

 

I stood and looked at my feet on the shoulder of the highway where Jim had left me. Jim was a lonely guy, and I felt for him. But I also sensed I had met a hundred Jims in my life, some of whom had been my dad, my grandfathers, my uncles, and some of my cousins. The kind of insanity my forefathers felt, the isolation and powerlessness, could be found, I realized, even in the vast ocean of prairie if man let it catch him there.

 

The solution to the isolation, of course, was interaction with others. I began to walk, to feel the familiar crunch of gravel and tarmac beneath my feet. I had a feeling that another step, and another after that, would take me to the people I needed to meet.

 

I wasn’t too far along in these thoughts when a minivan, the first car to pass, pulled to the shoulder in front of me. The side door slid open as I came along side, and the driver smiled. He brushed the bangs of blond hair from his glasses. He was thin, with glasses, in a dress shirt and tie.

 

"Give you a lift?" he said. A couple of boys, obviously twins, began to rearrange a little brother in a car seat belted to the bench behind the driver.

 

"I'm just going into Hastings," I said.

 

"That's where I'm headed," he said. "But I'll take you as far as you need to get. I just picked the kids up from the sitter, and we're looking for an adventure."

 

The boys had strapped their little brother into the back seat and sat next to the toddler. Their blue eyes glittered, and they smiled. The seat behind the driver was empty. A riot of fast-food wrappers and Styrofoam cups littered the floor.

 

"I'm Jim," the driver said. "Excuse the mess. You can put your pack on the seat and sit up front here."

 

All I could think as I took off my pack was that the Great Plains was lousy with Jims.

 

The boys abandoned their little brother and slid into the bench seat next to my pack. They were Jim and Harold, identical images of their father. The boys seemed to be about eight years old.

 

"Any relation of James Dobson?" Jim said after he shook my hand. It had been a frequent question. Dobson was a celebrity in the rural plains. His Focus on the Family organization, radio shows, and frequent appearances on cable television had built a following among those alienated by what they saw as the domination of modern culture by established elites based in coastal cities. It was hard to tell, when people asked, if the question of my relationship to Dobson was a way to assay my politics or start conversation. Jim beamed. He wanted a conversation.

 

“No. No relation. I’ve heard of him, though.”

 

"Well, I listen to James Dobson on the radio," he said. "He's a good man. You should take some time to hear his show."

 

“I will sometime. Thanks.”

 

As we pulled onto the road, the subject of conversation moved from Dobson to Jim and the kids. He was proud of his boys and had another child on the way. He worked as an accountant for a local grain-storage company. The boys were excited to hear about the stranger.

 

"Don't you ever get scared?" little Jim asked.

 

"Sure. Sometimes I can hardly move."

 

"What do you do?" The kid has precious eyes and straight, small teeth. He talked with his chin pointed upward.

 

"I walk. If I stand in one place too long, I can't move. So I keep moving."

 

"Have you met many people?" big Jim asked.

 

"More than I can tell. Friendly people, mostly."

 

"I think everyone's good at the core, even bad people," he said. "You have to be careful. Though I think if you put your trust in others, you can't go wrong most the time. You just have to know what to trust them with."

 

We drove through the outskirts of Hastings—billboards and gas stations. The plain dropped into the wide, board-flat Platte River Valley. Cottonwoods grew in a snake-like line along the river. Hastings seemed to run in infinite straight rays to the north. Soon we drove into lines of brick one- and two-story shops and restaurants that made the town look friendlier. The rain started again. The few trees along the road whipped in the wind. The sky brightened with flashes of lightning.

 

"Well, boys," Jim said, "it looks like we're in for a big one. That's adventure."

 


Today’s poem:

 

Four days out of the oven

 

This was her pie—a peck of apples

some walnuts, and a pear,

done up with butter-flake dough

sprinkled with sugar and cinnamon.

 

Knife set on the fresh laundered towel,

blade smeared with juice,

bowls, pans, measuring cups

still flour coated, slick with butter.

 

Grooves in the woven lattice,

second thoughts, realignments,

thoughts vanished with the thinker,

craft without the refinements of youth.

 

Around the room, mourners use forks

to crush the edge, notches where the index finger

of one hand pushed the dough

between two of the other, held slightly apart.

 

 


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